TJack's 2010 Raps

THÖR'S HAMMER wrote:

I like it, yea i like it...

The B&W was cool, the beat was scurvy. Was it me or were your vocals out of synch. Kinda old school kung fu movie thing. Dude you weren't lip synching right. call you milla vanilla

yeah the video messed up for some reason. it was off sync and it cut off.

The version on youtube is off sync (yet again) so I uploaded it on vimeo and it's better quality on here as well.

http://vimeo.com/16223713

I'm livin in the eighth week of fantasy
doin something mean to it
do it better than anybody ya ever seen it
Get off that Kanye
onto my own shit
I guess I'm about to make my own music
KANYE CHORUS
Got Ryan this week, it's an epic fight
Got Andre and Arian playing Monday Night
Tony Romo gone but I aint trippin yet
Still in contention, yeah I'm still a threat.
5 in a row? That's a nice streak.
Too bad it has to end this week.
huh? It has to end this week.
Cause right now I'm about to reach my peak.
KANYE CHORUS
I'm about to go in for more
Got so many tools like a department store
My team so good you just can't ignore
In eighth place but it's time to restore
Get ready cause I'm making my playoff run
Yes it's begun, I won't be outdone
Cause I'm a solder like Kellen Winslow
You know I do it for my team, Tim Tebow.
But I'm not the Florida Gators
Just tryin to show that I am greater
That my time is now and it wont be later
Does that make sense, or do I need a translator?
On the last verse now, almost finished
This rap was extra long, undiminished
Props to Kanye for this awesome beat
And Ryan, good luck with your defeat.

Nicely done Jordan as always. You get better and better each week, and this one is no exception.

I'm about to go in for more
Got so many tools like a department store


My favorite line of the whole thing ^. Also like the Gator stuff with Tebow and Winlsow.

We need to get on a track together or something! That would be epic